Im like in this build up interesting way too enhanced more and more.
Too improved this hmm i think much on that and some parts you know you can make 1st note make expossure i mean volume up some accent alike i think that should do this in dynamic and not interfering on concept in this track.
I think you already very good in whats you done already if you can improve well for me its not much space you can improved mixing and other stuff for me at least you making on good level. Well maybe are something i cant see so others maybe see it but for me its really ok. Good work.